Layout-23/25:
This layout has awesome colors, and a great picture. Not only that, but the words on your picture made me immediately start humming that song. Everything fits together very nicely. My only small complaint is that the links are all at the bottom and kind of smushed together. I realize that with this type of layout, you're hard pressed to fit links in *anywhere* but there must be a better solution somewhere.
I also think it's really cool that the title of your page reflects the title of your diary entry. Neato!

Content-50/50:
I extremely liked it that you separated this particular entry up by what you were typing about. The first part is your thoughts on love, and let me tell you girl, I've been there! Reading your diary makes me feel like you somehow had access to MY 13-year-old diary and typed out what I was feeling. From the date I see that you are now about 15 or so, which is even harder than 13. Let me just say to you, please, hang in there. My diary makes me feel like an older sister to you, and I have to strain myself from giving you advice.

Also, at your age, or at least, at what your age was when you wrote this, boys are too immature to want anything deep out of a relationship. They are just discovering that girls DON'T have cooties, and they want to fool around.
Trust me, it's not worth it. I know this is going to be hard to hear, but you don't want that kind of attention from boys. I really like that you summed up the love section with that realization, and talked about what God's plan is for you. As a fellow Christian, I can tell you that if you don't follow the path that God has set aside for you, there will be consequences. And they aren't going to be pretty. Trust me.

Then you moved on to your perspective on life. You wrote that you thought something was wrong with you. Boy can I relate to that.

This is the one case where I think it is okay with me that your diary entry is kind of a-typical, because a lot of diarylanders are older than you, and when they read it, it will bring them back to their own feelings of separation and "what's-wrong-with-me-itis" that every teenager goes through.

Your entry makes me smile so many times, because I have felt the feelings that you talked about so many times. I think that anybody reading this can really relate to you. I hope that you continue to write.
Great entry. I have absolutely no complaints about it.

Contact-3/5:
You have e-mail and notes on the main page, which is okay, but I didn't even realize you had a guestbook until I accidentally stumbled over it in your extras. Might I suggest moving it to the main page so people just passing through know it's there?

Errors-5/5:
In some ways, I could tell that you were 13. For example, the fact that your entry is slightly peppered with the word "like". But I won't hold that against you, hopefully you'll grow out of it. Other than that, good spelling, good grammar, doesn't seem to be any broken links.

Navigation-4/5:
Again, links on the bottom just isn't that great, especially if you tend to write long entries and I just want to click stuff.
Bonus-7/5:
Woot! You linked me, even though this review took ages. Good girl! You also have a nice array of different types of extras, not just a thousand different surveys. It was refreshingly original.

Would I read another entry?-4/5: I'm seriously considering it.

Quote from Entry: "But do you know how tired I am of sitting in front of the TV or computer on a lot of Friday nights, emailing people, whatever, and a lot of my friends are out at the movies or skiing or having fun with friends?"

Last Thoughts: Keep writing!
Score 96/100

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